Syrenian
The Perelandrian language seems to be a Semitic-Polynesian (Outlier) language, however, it is remarkable different from either, no doubt owing to its unique situation. It is spoken on the planet Perelandra. Two sentient species inhabit this planet, one entirely human and the other a green, human-esque species. The humans (Perelandrans) live entirely on the oceans of Pere- landra and lead absolutely nomadic lives.
Perelandra
The planet itself is remarkably different from Earth. There are no terrestrial formations at all, save one. That is, the entire planet is ocean, apart from the uninhabitable, frozen, polar regions, and one fixed land-mass. Perelandra does not lack “land”, however. Vast numbers of mobile “is- lands” exist, undulating platforms ranging in size from a few square meters to dozens of square kilometers. Trees and other large flora grow there, though they are far more flexible than their Terran counterparts. A bewildering array of fauna exist too, a sizable majority of which is am- phibious to sea and sky. “Dragons” or “dinosaurs” exist, though none has ever been observed larger than a Big Cat. Aquatic fauna also do not exist beyond a certain size, comparable to the killer whales of Earth. A continual cloud cover envelopes the planet, at the height of Earth’s cirrus clouds. This ubiq- uitous fog is the color of gold or copper. The sun, moon(s) stars are completely unknown to the Perelandrans. The planet’s weak magnetic field (and the lack of ferrous tools) mean North and South are only distinguished by the remote presence of ice. Without sunrises and sunsets, East and West can only be referenced as “with the world-current” or against it (but of course, that current reverses across the equatorial line.)
The oceans of Perelandra have a mere fraction of the salinity Earth oceans. An average ocean depth is a tenth of Earths’, though great tenches have been observed. The number of ecosystems is very small, despite the planet being very comparable to Earth in size, gravity, sidereal day and atmosphere. Because from the Coriolis effect, anything carried by the ocean current is capable of being swept anywhere within its hemisphere. Hence, while Perelandra teems with life on a scale unimaginable on Earth, there is very little specialization of species. It was previously assumed that Perelandra was equivalent to the planet Venus, though that is of course impossible. Perelandra has tides consistent with a large moon or system of moons. 2  Given the unique method of transportation to and from Perelandra, it is not possible to assertain with certainty which planet it it. Current theories range between a planet in another solar system and Venus at a distant time in the past/future.
The environment of Perelandra has had a vast impact on the Perelandrian language. On Earth, a great majority of time is spent without an apparent changes taking place. On Perelandra, change is constant. The land “waves”, the trees bend, the wind blows and nothing is ever constant. There is no sun in the sky, just an ever shifting high fog. Without careful planning, an individual would drift between islands (and hence the entire world) an never retain any friends or family. The largest island observed might hold a few hundred people, but no crowd of more than 20 has ever been known to exist.
Verbal Parameters
Aside from the handful of particles, conjunctions, interjections, and clitics, verbs make up the entirety of the Perelandrian language. The functionality of nouns, as found in all Earth languages, is covered by participles. Adjectives are stative verbs, adverbs are a mood of verbs, adpositions are contained in verbs, even cardinal numbers are impersonal verbs. Perelandrian verbs are inflected for DEIXIS, NUMBER , ASPECT, MOOD, and VOICE. Participles must be marked for CLASS and STATE. Any Indicative or Negative verb may become an ADVERB.
Voice
The role of Voice in Perelandrian nouns most closely corresponds to Case in Earth languages, and is therefore a very good starting places for learners of the language.
A verb must be in one of the seven voices available. If the “subject” or argument of the verb precedes it, it is said to be on the “active side”. If it follows, the “passive side”. Not all voices accept arguments on either side.
Active side | Voice Name | # | Passive side |
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Yes | CAUS.ATIVE | 5 | No |
Yes | ERG.ATIVE | 4 | Yes |
Yes | ANTI.PASSIVE | 3 | Yes |
Yes | THEM.ATIC | 2 | Yes |
Yes | PAT.IENTIVE | 1 | Yes |
No | IMP.ERSONAL | 0 | No |
No | RES.ULTIVE | -1 | Yes |
- Ergative
- The active side of a verb in the ERGATIVE voice is the most “normal” for speakers of English. I ran a mile and You gave money are sentences where the person performing the action is stated first, in the emphatic position. The passive side of the ERGATIVE VOICE is more complicated. It can be adjutative, mirative, or benefactive, but is perhaps most comparable to the English “pseudopassive”, i.e. I had the car washed. or I got Michael fired. The subject is still the source of the action, but the they are not so much the focus. The listener may feels compelled to ask who actually performed the action.
- Antipassive
- On the active side, the ANTIPASSIVE voice may seem difficult to distinguish from the ERGATIVE in many cases. English treats all nouns alike when they are in any kind of active role. Perelandrian distinguishes between the intentional actor and and the unintentional, and relegates the unintentional to Voice #3. The Agent or Force or Source is encoded in the ERGATIVE. The Experiencer requires the ANTIPASSIVE. The passive side of the ANTIPASSIVE voice expects the beneficiary of an action or the manner of an action. The Instrumental means also goes here.
- Thematic
- The active side of the THEMATIC voice expresses the initial recipient of the action. This can be the Indirect Object, depending on the English verb. In order to determine the thematic subject of a sentence, the usual question to ask is, “Who is the recipient of the action?” The passive side of the THEMATIC voice is typically the less personal recipient of the action.
- Patientive
- The active side of the PATIENTIVE voice expresses the ultimate recipient of the action of the verb. If the active side of the ERGATIVE answers “Who verbed it?”, then the active side of the PATIENTIVE answers “What was verbed?”. The passive side of the PATIENTIVE often expresses context or location. In English, this is often expressed as the passive voice of the verb plus a preposition (somewhat colloquial). What was played in? or Where was he fired from?.
- Impersonal
- The IMPERSONAL voice cannot take argument, so it has neither “side”. In English, only certain verbs are typically impersonal but even they require dummy pronouns. Examples are weather terms, such as It is hot or There is a lot of rain around here. Perelandrian can do this with almost any verb.
- Causative
- The CAUSATIVE voice can be tricky for English speakers, who must be careful not to jump from a lower voice to this one in order to ask a “why” question. The CAUSATIVE voice can only take an argument on the active side and denote the source of the entire chain of events, from the ERGATIVE actor through PATIENTIVE recipient. English is not careful to distinguish be- tween Who blew out the candle? I did; What blew out the candle? I had my bellows blow them out; and Why are the candles blown out? I blew them out. The CAUSATIVE voice is the answer only to a fourth question, Why did you blow the candles out? For fear of fire.
- Resultative
- At the opposite end of the spectrum from the CAUSATIVE, the RESULTATIVE voice can only used to express a later effect of the entire set of actions, i.e. the τ ελoς of the verb. Kissing produced anger. Cutting resulted in more. The argument of a RESULTIVE voiced-verb may only appear on the passive side.
Mood
Perelandrian verbs must be in one of six voices listed below. In Perelandrian, participles are the most irreal mood. This effect can be countered by using the FREQUENTIVE or UBIQUITOUS aspect. 9 
Realis | Irrealis | Participle | |
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Factual | Indicative | Subjunctive | Participle |
Counterfactual | Neg.ative | Opt.ative | Adv.erbial |
- Indicative
- The overwhelming majority of statements in Perelandrian (like any language) are in the Indicative. Note, however, that nothing speculative, doubted, dubiously inferred, re- ported by unsubstantiated witnesses or simply desired can be expressed in this mood. There is also a separate mood for negative statements. Less-polite, positive commands are given in the Indicative mood. Imperfective aspects indicate commands for ongoing action. Perfective aspects indicate commands viewed as a single event. Prosody and context alone distinguish imperatives from declaratives.
- Negative
- Perelandrian expresses negative sentences through a separate mood. The simple English particle/adverb not is usually the indicator that this mood ought to be used. The prefix un-, however, is typically expressed through the REGRESSIVE aspect. Less-polite, negative commands are given in the Negative mood. Imperfective aspects indicate commands not to engage in ongoing action. Perfective aspects indicate commands not to do an action viewed as a single event. Prosody and context alone distinguish imperatives from declaratives.
- Subjunctive
- The Subjunctive mood conveys a generally positive or likely event that has not happened yet or that is unclear whether it has happened already. Hence, the subjunctive often is used as a kind of “future tense” and arises in all conditional or modal expressions. Polite, positive commands are given in the Subjunctive mood.
- Optative
- The Optative mood is used for non-actualized events that are less likely or negative. It also doubles as a kind of “future negative tense”. Most conditional or modal expressions that take the subjunctive also accept the optative as a “less-likely” or negative alternative. Polite, negative commands are given in the Optative mood.
Aspect
Like many Earth language, Perelandrian does not encode tense on its verbs, only aspect. For those unfamiliar with the distinction, aspect expresses the speakers view of the action, whether it has parts or not. The Perfective aspect sees the action as a whole, which often means it is com- plete. Such verbs have more of a “foreground” appearance. The Imperfective aspect expresses the speakers view of an action as having parts, which often implies incompleteness. Imperfective verbs are therefore more in the “background”.
Imperfective | Endoclitic Particle | Perfective |
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STAT.IVE | No | AOR.IST |
DISC.ONTINUOS | ONE | MOM.ENTAE |
FREQ.UENTIVE | UNIV.ERSAL | UBI.QUITOUS |
PROG.RESSIVE | No | No |
REG.RESSIVE | No | No |
INT.ENSIVE | MORE | COMP.ARATIVE |
No | No | SUPER.LATIVE |
DIM.INUITIVE | LESS | DEP.RECIATIVE |
No | No | INF.ERIOR |
INCEP.TIVE | BEG.INNING | INCH.OATIVE |
CESS.ATIVE | END.ING | TERM.INATIVE |
PERF.ECT | RETRO.SPECTIVE | PLU.PERFECT |
Number
In English, everything is either one (singular) or many (plural). Other Earth languages have the “dual” for two of something. There are vestigial remnants of this in English, when we speak of a pair of pants or both of two and yet all of many. Many Earth language also have a “paucal” number, periphrastically possible in English (e.g. a few, a couple, some, “five minutes”). It is convenient to say that Perelandrian has the dual and paucal, but the number of excep- tions in the use of the dual for exactly two is limitless. Instead, it is more productive to use an analogy such as mono vs. stereo or monocular vs. binocular.
- Paucal
- Verbs that are not marked for Vision/Number indicate that the source or end of the action is not very many in number. Perelandrian has no way to talk about “a hundred- thousand grains of sand” but would have to say “a few carpets of sand” or some such paraphrasis. The paucal is “fuzzy” and can refer from as few as one to perhaps more than ten. The entire group is taken as one, variegated item.
- Dual
- In many Earth languages, the dual is used to refer to body parts. This is true of Perelandrian as well, but it must have expanded from there to subsume the informal pronouns and eventually all non-polite address. Failing to use the dual in dialogue indicates “standoffish- ness” and an aloof disconnect with the interlocutor. Family units, however large, are in the dual. Body parts that don’t appear to require the dual are all spoken of this way. When questioned, Perelandrans say they picture the piece of anatomy as consisting of two parts (e.g. upper and lower forehead, two nares of the nose, two sounds to the one heart beating, etc.)
All verbs except those in the IMPERSONAL voice have an argument (English subject or object) that must be marked on the verb for definiteness and deixis.
Deixis
Definiteness | Distance | “Energy” | Name |
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Indefinite | All | All | NDF |
Definite | Proximal | Energetic | PE |
Active | PA | ||
Passive | PP | ||
Medial | Energetic | ME | |
Active | MA | ||
Passive | MP | ||
Distal | Energ./Active | DA | |
Passive | DP | ||
Obviative | All | OBV |
The RESULTIVE and CAUSTIVE voice do not inflect for energy.
; Definiteness : All non-Impersonal verbs in Perelandrian indicate whether their argument is definite or indefinite. Names are always definite. Topics are always definite. In discourse, a new, unexpected subject is indefinite, but immediately becomes definite.
- Distance
- The demonstrative “distance” from the speaker can be one of four levels.
- Energy
- Perelandrian requires the speaker to encode the “energy level” or quality of the argument of a verb. Because the “landscape” of Perelandra is constantly undulating, simply sitting up requires some effort! Hence, sitting is an ACTIVE level. For a person to stand up and/or actively engage in some task such as walking or swimming requires deliberate, conscious attention, and the subject is said to be ENERGETIC at such a time. Being inert or lying down is considered PASSIVE.
Class
Participles are markable for Class.
Name | Acronym | Infix | |||||||||||||||||||||
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Persons, Lightning, Forces | PLF | hiko | |||||||||||||||||||||
Living, Animate Beings | LAB |  kīlehe | Receptacles, Openings, Controls | ROC |  pipi | Solid, Discreet Things | SDT |  sū | Mushy, Porous Areas | MPA |   salu | Bendy, Flat Fractals | BFF |   saoka | Flowing, Undulating Flocks | FUF |   ‘ōkai | Cloudy, Random Hazes | CRH |  kohu | Unchanging, Dead Stuff | UDS |   mana |
PLF's are uncontrollable, (mostly) unpredictable, intentional things (cp. “acts of God/Nature”). LAB's are more predicable, but very alive. Cows, cats, and gravity. ROC's are that which is manipulated. An element of unpredictability remains, since anything can go in a box. SDT's are balls, fruits, and non-containers with clear boundaries MPA's have fuzzy boundaries, fuzzy definitions, e.g. mud or a mirage/reflection on a hot day. BFF's are the Perelandran “land”. This category sees the interlocking, patterned nature of bushes, carpets, ropes and shower curtains all together. FUF's include a school of fish, which is not the sum of individuals. One cannot study individual water molecules and understand a river. CRH - there is continual, complete cloud cover on Perelandra. It is always moving and changing, but does nothing. UDS's are how we see a majority of things in our world, whereas Perelandrans consider this the least populated, least important category there is.
State
Participles chains can be attributive, with the head coming last (right) or in Construct chains, with the non-Construct (Absolute) head coming last (right). Unmarked participles are in the Absolute state.
Texts
The North Wind and the Sun
The North Wind and the Sun were disputing which was the stronger, when a traveler came along wrapped in a warm cloak. They agreed that the one who first succeeded in making the traveler take his cloak off should be considered stronger than the other. Then the North Wind blew as hard as he could, but the more he blew the more closely did the traveler fold his cloak around him; and at last the North Wind gave up the attempt. Then the Sun shined out warmly, and immediately the traveler took off his cloak. And so the North Wind was obliged to confess that the Sun was the stronger of the two.
Once upon a time, there was yon Cold Blower and yon Warmer. These two were on-again- off-again fighting, talking about being more powerful, when yon lying-down coming-here person made and donned in order to get warm. These two made-peace, talking about he who triumphs, the person being-made-bare. This is being more powerful. Regarding the Cold Blower, he blew the most. But more-and-more-blowing more-and-more donning. Not triumphing, he called. Regarding the Warmer, he warmed-more-and-more. Immediately, that person un-donned. Finally, that Cold Blower made peace, saying, ”You are more powerful.” There is force. Kindness is better.
The Donkey Beater Story
There was once a man who beat his donkey every day. One day, a second man, who was a neighbor, came to the donkey-beater and asked, “Why do you beat your donkey?” The donkey- beater said, “Beating is all the donkey knows, I must beat him until he learns how to behave.” The donkey-beater then went into his home and discovered his dinner wasn’t ready, so he beat his wife. His neighbor heard the screams of the donkey-beater’s wife and came to the door. “You should not beat your wife so much,” said the neighbor. “I beat her until she learns to have dinner ready on time.” Some time later, the neighbor saw the donkey-beater beating his son in a field. This time, he did not say anything, but seized the donkey beater and began to beat him with a heavy cudgel. When the donkey-beater asked why his neighbor was beating him, his neighbor replied, “I will beat you until you learn not to beat others.”