Sandic LoCoWriMo 2011

This is the story that bornfor is writing for LoCoWriMo 2011. It is a work in progress.

Developments so far: The story's narrator is an 8-year-old boy, who is telling the tale of how he and his sister snuck out of the house for the day to go visit the zoo.

Story in Sandic

Current word count: 689

Intro

Frn me umii-i jeed baneot ahl. Wwhee deelew biab opeetenhaa, wii frn ba nu opeemii kambab ba. Miika kaneot ahl.

Kambaa jeeb baahl nuv male:l kolnuu me. Nuv su frn kolee baahl. Nuv ziald wii nuv jile:rra wii nuv troukaa amateei. A otesem aan mii. Peeteneot fe fii aan pian ymii frn kia baahl. Biab otemii karepi pal repda ba.

Ynneehii fel:e erep.

Main Body

Jeesriit fele: exahl tavel frn neot kasai. Le:ai exahl. Yecjjewi. Ivluun me oxahlnia midinin,deeva me baahl aan oxahl 8 uu 9. Exmect pa safpa ama me- frn ada me neotab fele: exsa. Iat neotab fele: nuv ka esa- a jeed neoterini baahl. Micma me wenai axahl, a neotauzeri skra kahamiact ae faee batelan. Otiahb aee axse, a axma ta dabin, oxahl auzerin faee su ae ta batelan. Mohnannia jeenuin awwxahl, kolnuu me wii fele: pa safpa aww, meer ama aww axsu ta diiumadabin.

Bee-enuu kolnuu me baxahl “Freela”- zaoania jeed baahl. Wii yneehii kolnuu me axahlra wenrai wwhee zaoa, kataeni, katreeji o grawwi aww ba grawwi-i. Awwxpiat o grawwi safpa aww (ta ivluun me oxahl siaderinin faee ta frn ae, 8 faee 6, a axmania wwhee fele:, ba ‘erinka’). Awwxhaec o seja ba grawwi aww, wii wwak oxahl nauleen erinrain, jjiacan kajetain wena, thiian kakantin kantabin frn aww neotusain. Oxparo frn jjew ta keeman pal zu, frn kia wwak omania, frn kia pal zu bamect- ta ankoan erinin, matemaain.

Fian mohnnia axmii kolnuu me: “skra kia oneot feed naat faee safpa aww ba usai ra, aan feed zuian, aan raug wwak ta ankoabin erinin, matemaain? Ymacig frn aan ma jeed, a ama aww fovi aahl gre kala, kasantai.”

Exmii atian aan ama aww asanta, wii kolnuu me ba keein, eenji, miib me biab axdeeva, skra kada ae ba frnsai exahl- kada ae ba kafadici, a jeed axneot sa. Meer ivin ta mohnan, eebian axfeed ama aww ba neera neotusai, atian axmii kolnuu me- “opeesanta auzo, opeema auzo!”- ba miib dusniati faee ta keeman, osanta. Biab axsa skra diionia frn aww ule:leeti.

Fele: aan kiab mii exneot sa, skra le:ia-aa jeed ba mohn gator dab jeedkoi axmii. Kasai frn ivi skra ta ivlun 8 me, exmii “okay, zuian otawwfeed- a natul otawwfeed, aan awwteahl eej pal safpa jeedsriit, ama aww zumian atefeed, aan ateneot sa aan fovin awwxahl.”

Wii yneehii awwxfeed dee safpa aww, kaholdcin pa twwinannia damdabin faee ba mohn, wii damdabin faee ta ankoan, frn op awwxsa aan omect nee mead aww, aan wwiab oteneot dam.

Pa tufan baxmect troukaa me, wii skra ta tasnidan neotjinin me, exsa frn tead baahl ba zu. Ber kolnuu me extreekaa natul, ufe me o ufe ae, wii ufe ae o ufe me, aan awwteneot ahl utofein o impriiaa jeeb ba erinrai.

Dalkanaia wwian kaneot jae, wii gre sriit neoterini, pal ba zu awwxahl. Wwak awwxraug ta ankoabin neodusniatin- jaethiiabin, jiiacabin dee ateec, boabin erinrain, frn op ta lozan oxahlco whee heefan. Kolnuu me axaen ra, wii berain awwxtreej, kamain awwxahlto wwhee aan awwahl jaethiian.

“G'alo, yahl pale!” exaen, kale:aneegi.
“Fele: yahl sinde!” axmale:ii kolnuu me, skra jeeguu oxahl ta bee-enuun ta jaethiian pal ba zu, otiahb awwxraug.
“Pale kawiic aan taug ta nokcabin!” Exjaeeto wwhee ba jaethiia, “kale:aneegi” jeed ba meadian.
“Sinde ber pee atefeed!” Ejj axaen kolnuu me.

A keia axmii- “Fele: ymacig aan raug ejj ta thiian, skra oahl wenarain...”

Exmaco aan atiab exneot bra. Pa meadab ta nokcan awwxfeed, wii tedia exraug ta keemabin wwak katovoin.

“Kiab oma?” Wwiab exbas, kolnuuian me karaugi. “Ole:eefiale:r, kaa-maa, a kia le:eema, zum katovoi?” Kamebnia exbas.

“Ha, pee tavel.” Ba kame kaxmii. “Zum nokcnia baxjard, wii siad awwneot sa, frn tead baahl.”

“Ha!” Unii axmale:ii kolnuu me. “Zum baahl, o loz me! Wwaa!” Axen pa ba keemabin. “Iab ole:eetiad!”

Ta zukeeman ba nockab dee ae oxvur. Exjile:r skra le:aact me.

“Bal piab baxdede?” Exbas, katemi.
“Iab baxneot bas! Iab baxneot bas, pee kada me.” Axmii kajile:ri. “A safpabian ywiic aan feed.”
“Okay, okay, otawwfeed safpabian, pee kolnuu.”