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====Ne Dunath Alcáspièvon==== | |||
Vek tuyaea alcáspièveithîm das, veia caruman. Jhor alcáspièvon te samigha. Jhiviken gyev fiván ne cichadîm, vek sar teizavoneithîm done shéshînarîm k'. T'vesîk jhor vae te syîrún. Naruv drayîth haláinîm ne kîlémavoneithîm. Saemirveithîm ne mmaváshîth krîtharún t'vesîk vo ne caruman. Vol caruman shav epararev ne gejhelle gaejîn 'sa alcáspeth. Vek lóbea alcáspièveithîm das, vel cresîn. | |||
===Smooth English=== | ===Smooth English=== | ||
We all travel to the ocean in the spring. The traveling is difficult. Snow still covers the passes when we first cross the mountains. Then we are at the forest. Fallen trees prevent our crossing. We arrive at the windy steppes, and then at the ocean. Over the ocean, we talk and sell very good traveling food. We all travel home in the winter. |
Revision as of 04:03, 30 April 2010
Translation by Kaleissin
vek'tuyaea, veia'caruman alcáspi'evaym. jhor'alcáspi'evad t'samigha. ve'sar teizavaym ne shéshinarim, jhiviken kemav fiván ne cichadaym. vesik'syirún, naruv dravith dehalaizen ne mlaym kilémavad. saemirvaym veia mmaváshith kritharún keia, te vesik'caruman. vol'caruman shatruvaym te epararevaym ne gejhelle alcáspethith gaejin. vek'lóbea, alcáspi'evaym ne cresin.
Smooth English
When spring comes we travel to the ocean. It is a difficult journey. First we must cross the mountains, whose passes often still has snow. Then comes the forest: fallen trees blocking our way. Then we reach the windy plains, and after that, the ocean. By the ocean we make and trade our excellent travel-fare. When fall comes, we travel home.
Corrected version by Arthaey Angosii
Ne Dunath Alcáspièvon
Vek tuyaea alcáspièveithîm das, veia caruman. Jhor alcáspièvon te samigha. Jhiviken gyev fiván ne cichadîm, vek sar teizavoneithîm done shéshînarîm k'. T'vesîk jhor vae te syîrún. Naruv drayîth haláinîm ne kîlémavoneithîm. Saemirveithîm ne mmaváshîth krîtharún t'vesîk vo ne caruman. Vol caruman shav epararev ne gejhelle gaejîn 'sa alcáspeth. Vek lóbea alcáspièveithîm das, vel cresîn.
Smooth English
We all travel to the ocean in the spring. The traveling is difficult. Snow still covers the passes when we first cross the mountains. Then we are at the forest. Fallen trees prevent our crossing. We arrive at the windy steppes, and then at the ocean. Over the ocean, we talk and sell very good traveling food. We all travel home in the winter.