Inverse Relay 2/Khangaþyagon: Difference between revisions
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</ref> yar nazgu. gelangar yar salaðershgu khælsart singart. iðuzhangar yar þoa. apangar yar þæsk <ref>Decided to coin a new word for this. </ref> yurish beb enþangar yar yi grenna'ut. gelangar yar undalam harrasip. | </ref> yar nazgu. gelangar yar salaðershgu khælsart singart. iðuzhangar yar þoa. apangar yar þæsk <ref>Decided to coin a new word for this. </ref> yurish beb enþangar yar yi grenna'ut. gelangar yar undalam harrasip. | ||
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We went to the sea in spring. That journey was difficult. There was show on the mountain path like a blanket, but we went by those mountains. We were at the plain of mint. A fallen oak blocked our way. We went across the plain with a small wind. We saw the sea. We made good food and traded it on the beach. We went home in winter. | We went to the sea in spring. That journey was difficult. There was show on the mountain path like a blanket, but we went by those mountains. We were at the plain of mint. A fallen oak blocked our way. We went across the plain with a small wind. We saw the sea. We made good food and traded it on the beach. We went home in winter. | ||
Revision as of 07:15, 17 November 2009
Translation by Sylvia Sotomayor
Smooth English
Corrected version by Pete Bleackley
gelangar [1] yar [2] þoa'am linisip. galgudahing gitommonban. dahinguf [3] tilse talpagosebgri mulsa'ekwaninguf [4] shosh gelangar yar talpbangur. dahangar yar salaðersham ifetuz. ulting terkha snarutosht [5] yar nazgu. gelangar yar salaðershgu khælsart singart. iðuzhangar yar þoa. apangar yar þæsk [6] yurish beb enþangar yar yi grenna'ut. gelangar yar undalam harrasip.
- ↑ I've put everything into the past tense, as it seems to fit the narrative better.
- ↑ Khangaþyagon is not pro-drop.
- ↑ The existential verb is indicated by putting "dah" in the passive.
- ↑ Adverbs agree with the verb!
- ↑ Past participle, rather than passive infinitive.
- ↑ Decided to coin a new word for this.
Smooth English
We went to the sea in spring. That journey was difficult. There was show on the mountain path like a blanket, but we went by those mountains. We were at the plain of mint. A fallen oak blocked our way. We went across the plain with a small wind. We saw the sea. We made good food and traded it on the beach. We went home in winter.
